Over the past eight months, since my retirement from elementary education, I have really enjoyed REIMAGINING (my #OneWord for 2024) myself. Part of that has included jumping head first into improving my craft writing picture books.
Although the path to attaining an agent and learning all about the traditional publishing world has a rather steep learning curve, there have been gems along the way. One is the amount of support and opportunity from the #KidLit community including many fun and informative writing contests, the other is connecting with other children's writers, like my wonderful critique partners! After recently spending the afternoon with my granddaughter, watching her partake in a common time-honored childhood tradition, I decided to enter the #SpringFlingKidLit Contest hosted by Kaitlyn Leann Sanchez and Ciara O'Neal. This fun contest asks writers to craft a 150-word story based on a spring-related GIF. Hope you enjoy! (And can relate! Haha!)
Dandelions Are Sneaky!
I run to the window to see if they’re here! They always come out when springtime is near. Their sweet yellow heads now cover the lawn. They’re just waking up with a pollen-filled yawn. I’ll have to wait longer-- the process proceeds from cute yellow flower to fluffy white seeds! Hooray! Now it’s time! I pick one so gently, then stop to consider my wishes, intently. Selecting my favorite, I deeply inhale. But the bloom is too close-- an important detail! My wish is forgotten, I cough and I choke. Who is that laughing? Could this be a joke? I scan the whole yard. There is no one around. Just fuzzy white flowers all over the ground. I pick out another and give it a try. I remake my wish, blowing seeds to the sky! So always remember before you begin, Dandelions are sneaky-- breathe out and not in!
Thank you so much to all the judges donating their time and prizes to this contest! Make sure you check out and support their amazing work HERE!
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Every year Susanna Leonard Hill runs several writing contests. This year I entered her Valentiny contest which required stories be no more than 214 words. The theme was "enthusiasm". I had so much fun writing Glitter and Glue and am happy to announce that it was a 6th place finalist! Glitter and Glue
Wow! Valentine’s Day was tomorrow! And Emersyn just couldn’t wait! She gathered her pencils, some markers and stencils, a card box she’d have to create! Her mom made a cut with some scissors so cards could slip right down inside. The next thing to do, was cut hearts and pour glue-- the glitter could then be applied! CUT, CUT, SNIP, SNIP, SNIP went the scissors, big hearts of pink, purple, and red. As she opened the glue, her doggy ran through-- now Spike wears a heart on his head! “Hey Mom, do we have any ribbon?” Out came the big box of craft tools. With loops and big twirls, forming hearts, shaping curls-- she ended up using six spools! Excitement just kept growing bigger! Her box would surprise EVERYONE! She colored and painted, her mom almost fainted, POOF! Glitter had just now begun! In no time she twinkled with color. Her Valentine box sparkled too! The table, the cat, and her kitchen’s floor mat were coated in sticky, wet glue. But Emersyn cheered, “YAY, I did it! It’s magical just like I planned!” Mom said to her sweetly, “Come set it here neatly.” “I can’t Mom, it’s stuck to my hand!” First of all, Happy New Year! I hope this year holds some amazing adventures for you! I am not usually into the whole One Word wave, but this year is a little different for me. As many of you know I retired last July after 32 years in public education. Having been immersed in the elementary education world for that long and then venturing out into the "real world" is like journeying to a new galaxy. Yes, it is that profound. Those of you who have been in education for a long time know exactly what I am talking about. We have our own vernacular, our own expectations of "the system" (some good, some not so good), our own ways of navigating successful interactions with children and adults depending on our "school roles", adherence to tight schedules (especially in elementary school where you have to plan and backup plan for every minute of the day); the entire culture of public education (although very different from when I first entered it all those year ago) is unique. When I left that structured system, a system that had been a major part of my life for over three decades, I felt a sense of disequilibrium! Although I have really been enjoying spending more time on my picture book writing interests, working on some contract projects for Drone Legends, and getting out and walking, it is a VERY different lifestyle. Embedded in my educator brain is a sense of guilt:
So, to combat these feelings and wean myself off the expectations (often unfair) that are engrained in many of us in the education world, I've decided to embrace my One Word for 2024! I'm going to reimagine what it means for me to be successfully educating others through different work - namely drone curriculum development, my STEM newsletter, and super fun author visits!
I'm going to reimagine what it means for me to be a picture book author by dipping my toes into the traditional publishing world - querying for an agent. I'm going to reimagine what it means to celebrate my new normal which may include spending time reading, taking pictures, exploring nature, checking my new trail cameras - and yes, it is okay if it's in the middle of the day! As a huge STEM advocate, I continually tout the importance of the imagining step when leading kids through the engineering design process. I am REALLY looking forward to 2024 - my REIMAGINING step! What are you reimagining this year? Since retiring, I've been spending a lot more time working to improve my craft as a picture book writer. This includes connecting with a lot of the children's writing community online. Having been in education my entire life, this new world of traditional publishing: querying agents, learning from editors, lurking as new online connections converse about the overwhelming process, has been very interesting! Last night when I saw others tweeting (yes, I will always call it that!) about Susanna Leonard Hill's 2023 Holiday Writing Contest, I knew I had to give it a shot (my first writing contest ever)! The theme this year is Holiday Countdown so the piece had to include counting something down. The hardest part was reducing my first draft to the 250 word limit, especially while trying to keep the rhyme and meter as tight as possible. Some of that smoothness was sacrificed, but lesson learned! Those of you who know me, know I am passionate about integrating relevant STEM at the elementary level! So you KNOW I had to include a drone in my entry! As I wrote Devoted Drone Deliveries, I thought back to missions our GLIDE girls had done over the years and how it is so important for girls to see themselves represented in drone education and the drone industry. I knew the main character had to be one of the most caring and amazing young drone pilots I'd had the pleasure to teach, Jordan. As a side note, the importance of growing this representation and elementary drone integration is exactly why I am so honored to be part of the curriculum team at Drone Legends! They share that passion! So anyway! Here is my debut writing contest entry! Enjoy!
Devoted Drone Deliveries Jordan loves the people who live in her neighborhood! Holidays are here again and so to do some good… She wants to use her trusty drone to give each house a gift, that way she’ll stay anonymous and spirits she will lift! House number 10, Mr. Frost works down at the deli. To him, she gives some homemade bread and jar of apple jelly. Number 9, Mrs. Green, a mom with seven kids, her gift is cookies, sweetly baked in tins with matching lids. Number 8, on down the street, John and Jerry Knox, they work out in the cold all day their gifts, knitted socks. Number 7 is the place the Lopez family lives. They always wave and shout hello, a smiley flag she gives. Number 6, Grandpa Frank, although he’s not related, he’s loved by everyone around his gift, art she created. Number 5, with fading paint belongs to Captain Smoots, he works hard daily catching fish; her drone delivers boots. Number 4, Mrs. Nell who has a bunch of cats, Jordan gives her treats and toys that look like little rats! Number 3 belongs to Ann who sleeps during the day, she works the night shift at the mill, for her, a big bouquet. Number 2, a tiny home owned by Officer Mark, a flashlight is his gift this year to help him in the dark. Number 1, the final stop is Jordan’s own home place. She views the pictures from the drone, smiles on EVERY face! |
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